题目内容
【题目】假设你是李津,从互联网上得知一个国际小学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括:
1. 自我介绍(包括性格、特长、英语能力,沟通能力等);
2. 参加意图(介绍中国的历史与文化并了解其他国家);
3. 希望获准。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件开关和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Looking forward to your reply!
Regards,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Jin, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I’d like to take part in it. I’ve been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I’ll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Regards,
Li Jin
【解析】此题为提纲式作文,为申请信。
写作步骤:
第一步:审题,抓要点。
1 . 从互联网上得知一个国际小学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。2. 自我介绍(包括性格、特长、英语能力,沟通能力等);
3. 参加意图(介绍中国的历史与文化并了解其他国家);4. 希望获准。
第二步:定人称,定时态。第一人称,一般现在时。
第三步:列提纲,写要点。
亮点分析:
注意使用连接词:如and, what’s more
高级结构:I’m Li Jin, a middle school student from China.(同位语)
I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.(定语从句)
高级词汇: as well., be accepted as