Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Lily在她的微博中说她为了减肥吃减肥药，而且经常不吃饭，导致身体变得很虚弱，状态很不佳。请你在她的微博上用英文给她留言，内容包括：

1.对她的现状表示担心；

2.指出吃减肥药以及经常不吃饭的坏处；

3.提出一些健康的减肥方法，如慢跑、定期到健身房健身等。

注意：1.词数100个左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：减肥药weight-loss pill；慢跑jogging；健身房gym

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lily

I’m sorry to learn that you are upset about being overweight recently.

I think you should stop taking weight-loss pills in no time because they are harmful to your health. Besides you need to eat a healthy diet to recover your strength. There are many other ways to lose weight. For example jogging is quite a popular form of exercise. You may do it in the morning or after supper. Another way is that you can go to the gym regularly which is also an effective way of losing weight and keeping healthy.

In a word if you insist on exercising you are sure to have an attractive figure and stay slim and healthy.

Yours’

Li Hua

【解析】根据题目得知你的英国笔友Lily在她的微博中说她为了减肥吃减肥药，而且经常不吃饭， 导致身体变得很虚弱，状态很不佳。请你在她的微博上用英文给她留言，内容包括：1.对她的现状表示担心； 2.指出吃减肥药以及经常不吃饭的坏处；3.提出一些健康的减肥方法， 如慢跑、定期到健身房健身等。同学们要能适当把握三个部分的内容，使文章内容相协调，使用恰当的连接词Besides，In a word，使语义连贯，连接顺畅。

【范文亮点】

范文有一些值得大家学习的地方，如：文章使用了很多优秀的词汇和短语：be upset about失望， in no time马上 ，be harmful to 有害， insist on坚持，等等；文章也使用了多样的句式，如定语从句Another way is that you can go to the gym regularly which is also an effective way of losing weight and keeping healthy.等等。