Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)。并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。

　　Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday, and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school．Early on the morning, we set out．Li Ming was carrying a compass and a tent in his backpack, but in my there was a flashlight, a map, a knife, a first-aid kit, some match, candles, food, and clothing．On the way to the campsite, we climbed a hill, and then we swim across a river, pushed the backpacks on a large piece of wood we had found by the river．

　　As we got into a forest, we missed our way．Lucky, we found the right direction with the compass．By the time we reached to the campsite, it was already dark．Li Ming then put up the tent, and I made a fire and started cooking．Then two of us spent the night in the forest．We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems．

　　It was quite an experience for me, which I'll never forget for the rest of my life．

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解析：

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