Question

短文改错 Dear Xiao Hua, 　 I am sorry to learn that you have the bad habit of smoking．Though 1．_________ we’ve been friends, I think that is my duty to call your attention 2．_________ to such a bad habit, that may be harmful to your health and 3．_________ which you may spend much of your money．Yesterday a doctor 4．_________ gave us a lecture on the dangers of smoking．He said, “Tobacco has 5．_________ the element of nicotine which is great harm to human body． 6．_________ It causes coughing, bronchitis, pneumonia and any other diseases．” 7．_________ Dear friend, I sincerely hope you to stop smoking．When we meet 8．_________ this summer I’ll be very happy if you still hold a cigarette between 9．_________ your lips．Please you consider seriously what the doctors said． 10．_________ 　 Yours sincerely 　 Li Ming

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解析：

　　1．Though改为Since。此处是因为状语从句，不是让步状语从句。

　　2．that之后加it或that改为it。作形式主语只能用it。

　　3．that改为which。非限制性定语从句不能用that引导。

　　4．which前加for。构成spend money for the habit结构。

　　5．正确。

　　6．is改为does。构成do harm to结构，但不能将harm改为harmful，因有形容词great修饰。

　　7．去掉any。此处不表示“任何其它疾病”意思。

　　8．to改为will。不能用hope sB．to do sth构成，但可接从句。

　　9．happy改为unhappy。逻辑错误，根据上下文意义，表示“不高兴”。

　　10．去掉you。不能使用please sB．do sth结构，只能用please do sth结构。