Question

【题目】有没有想过给自己写信，尤其是给将来的自己写信。请用英语给五年后的自己写封信，信的内容包括以下三个方面：

1.写信的目的；

2.给五年后的你一些忠告；

3.如何看待五年后的你。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear myself,

Yours,

Me

Answer 1

【答案】Dear myself,

I have been confused for a long time, neglecting to think about the future. Escaping from the future sounds abnormal. If one can not face the future how can he face the reality? Thus I decide to write this letter to you—myself, five years later.

First of all, I want to give some suggestions. Learning’s light shall never dim in your life for no one can survive in this fast changing world without learning. And remember: health is wealth. One can not abandon any kind of sport. Also, parents should be your first concern and deserve to be loved forever.

Besides I would like to remind you of keeping your spirits up, which are the basis of your life.

5 years later, wow. Now you are reading this letter in front of Beijing Tian’anmen Square. You will be working in Beijing after graduation, being an excellent translator or an energetic teacher.

Yours,

Me

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时态为主。2.采用第一人称和第二人称。3.要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。要采取简单句和复合句结合的方法。

【范文亮点】

1. 范文采取了非谓语动词作状语（I have been confused for a long time, neglecting to think about the future.）（You will be working in Beijing after graduation, being an excellent translator or an energetic teacher.）和非限定性定语从句（Besides I would like to remind you of keeping your spirits up, which are the basis of your life.）等句式。

2. 文章采用了dim；keep up；basis；fast-changing等高级单词或短语。采用了First of all，Besides等过渡衔接词。