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良好的人际关系是建设和谐社会的关键。假设你是李华，最近你校对“中学生如何交友？”的话题展开讨论，大家发表了不同的看法。请你根据下面所给内容，写一封信给《21世纪报　高中生版》“Your Words”栏目，反映讨论情况。并说明你对如何交友的看法。
为何交友
建立良好的人际关系，构建和谐社会
 
交友对象
学习上的朋友
互帮互学，促进提高……
 
生活上的朋友
互助互利，摆脱困境……
 
情感上的朋友
倾诉烦恼，分享喜悦……
 
如何交友
(联系自己，拟定内容，列举两至三点。)
 
注意：1.对所给要点，不要简单翻译；2.词数150左右。开头和结尾不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
Recently our class have had a heated discussion on how middle school students should make friends. ......
Yours ever,  
Li Hua
Dear editor,
Recently our class have had a heated discussion on how middle school students should make friends.As we all know, good interpersonal relationship plays an important role in building harmonious society.
Many people suggest that they should make friends who are of great benefit to their studies，so they will help each other and make greater progress with their studies. Some believe that they should have friends related to their life.Whenever they have difficulty dealing with problems in terms of life, they can help rid themselves of the problems. In addition, others agree that they should have some friends who can listen to them attentively and share their bitterness and joy.
What I want to stress is that each of us should have a true friend.T o make friends, we should try to remember the names of the people we contact and learn not to judge people by their appearances. Besides, we need to be friendly and care about them.When disagreement does occur, it's wise of us to talk it over to others. In brief, making true friends can really enable us to improve ourselves.
Yours ever,
Li Hua

试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文出现很多好的句型：Recently our class have had a heated discussion on how middle school students should make friends.这句话用了宾语从句，As we all know, good interpersonal relationship plays an important role in building harmonious society. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句，    Many people suggest that they should make friends who are of great benefit to their studies，so they will help each other and make greater progress with their studies. 这句话用了定语从句和虚拟语气，Some believe that they should have friends related to their life.这句话用了过去分词做定语，Whenever they have difficulty dealing with problems in terms of life, they can help rid themselves of the problems.这句话用了让步状语从句， What I want to stress is that each of us should have a true friend.这句话用了主语从句和表语从句，To make friends, we should try to remember the names of the people we contact and learn not to judge people by their appearances.这句话用了目的状语， When disagreement does occur, it's wise of us to talk it over to others. 这句话用了it做形式主语，making true friends can really enable us to improve ourselves. 这句话用了动名词做主语，还有范文还使用了In addition, Besides, In brief,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。
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As a person in modern society，you should never forget that everyone needs encouragement. And everybody who receives it is changed by it. It was novelist Mark Twain who said :“One compliment can keep me going for a whole month.”      
The impact that encouragement makes on people can be deep and significant. A word of encouragement from a teacher to a child can change a life. A word of encouragement from a spouse
can save a marriage. A word of encouragement from a leader can inspire a person to reach his potential. Like Zig Ziglar says,” You never know when a few sincere words can have an impact on a life.”     
I’ve read that the 19th century writer Walt Whitman struggled for years to get anyone interested in his poetry. In the midst of his discouragement，Whitman received a life-changing letter from an admirer of his work. The note read:“ Dear sir, I am not blind to the worth of the wonderful gift of Leaves of Grass. I find it the most extraordinary piece of wit and wisdom that America has yet contributed. I greet you at the beginning of a great career.” It was signed by Ralph Waldo Emerson.
Whitman enjoyed a long career and is now considered one of the giants of' American literature. But when times were tough，he needed encouragement to keep him going.
This season is the perfect time to give a gift everybody wants—and everyone needs.
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；
2．然后以约120个词就¨鼓励对人生的影响”进行议论，内容包括：
(1) 以事例说明鼓励对人的影响；
(2) 谈谈你的认识或感想。
【写作要求】
1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

【写作内容】
时间：上周末
对象：在中国农村教书的志愿者卢安克(Eckart Loewe)
主题：他的志愿者之路
基本情况：1968年出生在德国汉堡(Hamburg)；1990年夏天，短短3个月的中国之旅，
让他深深地爱上了广西的乡村。
从教过程: （1）1999年，在广西的一个乡村成为一名志愿者教师；
（2）发现中国家长特别重视成绩却忽视孩子的天性和兴趣。
教育理念：如果一个人只是为了别人的理念而生存，他就永远找不到自我的方向和力量。
【写作要求】
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
最近的一项调查表明如今的中国青年的人生目标比过去要显得多元化。这种选择的变化表明社会在进步，人们的生活目标较以前更为实际。
比例
目标
手段
53.5%
挣钱给自己买一房一车
 
71.9%的人说将努力拼搏以实现人生的目标
44%
提高生活质量
43.7%
成为富人
23.9%
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【参考词汇】  多元化（的）：diversified    调查对象：respondent
【写作要求】
1. 以上述信息为材料写一段短文。可以根据实际适当发挥；
2. 中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰．书写规范；
3. 不少于100字，
4. 标题不计入字数。
上个星期你们班同学就“现代社会是否需要孔子精神“进行了一次讨论。讨论结果如下表所示。请根据表中内容写一篇100字左右的英语短文。参考词汇：孔子思想：Confucian thought
正方
60%的同学认为，世界各国对孔子的研究愈来愈热，反映了人们对其思想的重视；孔子思想推动了世界和平的发展。
反方
40%的同学认为孔子思想诞生于几千年前，早已过时。孔子思想在某种意义上限制了社会的发展。
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感恩，是我们生活中永恒的话题。学会感恩，学会热爱生活，我们将会感受到更多快乐。假如你校拟举行一次有关“感恩”的演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点写一篇英语演讲稿。
要点：
1. 感恩对象（如：父母、老师、朋友……）；
2. 为何感恩；
3. 如何感恩；
注意：
只能选择一个感恩对象；
可对所给要点做适当发挥；
演讲稿中不得提及考生所在的学校师生或本人姓名；
词数在130字左右；开头已给出（不计词数）。
Good afternoon, everyone! it’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum”                                                                          
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                             
                                                                                            
刚进入高中，一些同学对高中生活不太适应，为此，你校“英语俱乐部”就“How to enrich our life in the Senior School”展开征文比赛。就此话题，你向该社团投稿反映你的个人看法。
1. 广交朋友。2. 积极参加体育活动，强身健体。
3. 努力拼搏，梦想进入理想大学。   4. ……
提示：1. 可加入一些细节，使文章更加通顺合理。
2. 词数：100字左右（开头部分不计）
强身健体: build up one′s  body   
How to enrich our Life in the Senior School
As senior school students, we′r e expected to make our life meaningful and enjoyable.
假如你是Jack Darwin, 你的客户Li Ming给你写了一封信, 内容如下：
Dear Jack,
I’m writing this letter to ask for a favor. I will visit England soon, but I know little about the culture of England. Please give me a hand.
Yours,
Li Ming
请给Li Ming回一封信，要点如下：
1．遵守靠左行走或驾驶的交通规则，出门带伞；
2．公共场合应注意的问题(如保持安静)；
3．和英国人交往要遵守的事项(如提前预约，尊重隐私)。
注意：
1．词数：120左右，信的格式、开头和结尾已好，不计入总词数
2．参考词汇：appointment  n.预约
3．无需逐条翻译，可适当增加细节。
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1. 此现象说明的问题
产生此现象的原因（至少两点）
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注意：1. 词数120左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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