Question

19．请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章．
Please put your phone down Daddy，we haven't finished the story!"Hearing these heartfelt words from my four year old daughter was an uncomfortable wake up call．How had I let the shiny electronic box in my hand take so much of my attention that it could even interrupt a short bedtime story with my precious children？
It's no exaggeration to suggest that our mobile devices are in danger of taking over our entire lives．Time magazine found that 68% of users take their devices to bed with them，20% check their phones every ten minutes and one third report feeling anxious when briefly separated from their beloved gadget．According to Osterman research，79% of respondents take their work-related device on vacation and 33% admit to hiding from family and friends in order to check Facebook and Twitter．It's hard to deny that these are worrying trends．
 
【写作内容】
1．用大约30字概括上文和图表的主要内容；
2．结合上述信息，用大约120字论述：
（1）科技的发展是否意味着人们生活更幸福．（选择"是"或"否"并论述你的观点）
（2）你认为在生活中应当如何处理人和科技的关系．
【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句； 
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题．
A father's concern that smartphone is depriving him of his precious family time does not stand alone．Favorable opinions as there are，the majority of Americans today view technology as hazardous．（31 words）
However，no pains，no gains．The world evolves as human technology leaps forward，along whose process there is bound to be sacrifices．The definition of happiness may vary，but a more connected，convenient，and creative society is undeniably nothing a modern man wouldn't have desired．With digital devices booming around，we are given so many choices that our minds have been freed to a degree our ancestors could never anticipated．
That being said，to make sure technology doesn't get in the way，you need to unplug from the information highway and share your journey with your family and friends from time to time．A balance between man and computers will lead to an ultimate happiness．（115 words）．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一） A father's concern that smartphone is depriving him of his precious family time does not stand alone．
在概括时，使用that引导同位语从句，解释concern的内容．
（高分句型二）With digital devices booming around，we are given so many choices that our minds have been freed to a degree our ancestors could never anticipated．
With的独立主格结构和so---that引导的目的状语从句完美结合；
（高分句型三）That being said，to make sure technology doesn't get in the way，you need to unplug from the information highway and share your journey with your family and friends from time to time
That being said是现在分词独立主格结构在句中做状语，让文章大放异彩．
高级词汇和短语：hazardous冒险的；no pains，no gains一分耕耘一分收获；unplug去掉…

解答 One possible version：
  （高分句型一）  A father's concern that smartphone is depriving him of his precious family time does not stand alone．Favorable opinions as there are，the majority of Americans today view technology as hazardous．（31 words）【选"是"】
    However，no pains，no gains．The world evolves as human technology leaps forward，along whose process there is bound to be sacrifices．The definition of happiness may vary，but a more connected，convenient，and creative society is undeniably nothing a modern man wouldn't have desired．（高分句型二）With digital devices booming around，we are given so many choices that our minds have been freed to a degree our ancestors could never anticipated．
    （高分句型三）That being said，to make sure technology doesn't get in the way，you need to unplug from the information highway and share your journey with your family and friends from time to time．A balance between man and computers will lead to an ultimate happiness．（115 words）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧