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10．假定你是李华，在获悉Perfect English 英文报社将举行国际中学生"中华传统文化"（Chinese traditional culture）征文比晒活动后，你想写信请你的美国朋友Peter参加．信的内容包括：
1．主题：中华传统文化知识；
2．活动时间：2017年7月1日-31日；
3．投稿邮箱：CTCcompetition@perfectenglish．com．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
The newspaper Perfect English is going to hold an International High School Student Competition，whose theme is Chinese traditional culture．（高分句型一）It will last from July 1st to July 31st．Any student who is interested is welcome to participate．（高分句型二）I know you are always interested in Chinese traditional culture，especially some festivals，like the Spring Festival and the Mid-autumn Festival．This is surely a good chance for you to deepen your understanding of them．If you want to join，you can send your article to CTCcompetition@perfectenglish．com．Also don't hesitate to contact me if you have any question．（高分句型三）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，在获悉Perfect English 英文报社将举行国际中学生"中华传统文化"（Chinese traditional culture）征文比晒活动后，你想写信请你的美国朋友Peter参加．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：主题：中华传统文化知识；活动时间：2017年7月1日-31日；投稿邮箱：CTCcompetition@perfectenglish．com． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Chinese traditional culture中国传统文化；be interested in对…感兴趣；hesitate to 犹豫地去做；
The newspaper Perfect English is going to hold an International High School Student Competition，whose theme is Chinese traditional culture．（高分句型一）
Any student who is interested is welcome to participate．（高分句型二）
Also don't hesitate to contact me if you have any question．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       The newspaper Perfect English is going to hold an International High School Student Competition，whose theme is Chinese traditional culture．（高分句型一）It will last from July 1st to July 31st．Any student who is interested is welcome to participate．（高分句型二）I know you are always interested in Chinese traditional culture，especially some festivals，like the Spring Festival and the Mid-autumn Festival．This is surely a good chance for you to deepen your understanding of them．If you want to join，you can send your article to CTCcompetition@perfectenglish．com．Also don't hesitate to contact me if you have any question．（高分句型三）
       Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．