Question

【题目】请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。

Li Jiang

When I was in the primary school, I often met with problems which I could not work out on my own, especially in English and arithmetic. So I downloaded an online educational app named Zuoyebang. Since then, I have been using several kinds of such software, for example, Xuebajun and Haofenshu. Whenever I have a problem, I will turn to them. As a result, my study has been progressing steadily. I will strongly recommend these apps to my friends.

Su Hua

After entering the senior high, I found I had more and more difficulty learning maths and English. As many online learning products are quite popular among other students, my parents subscribed to one for me too. After that, however, I feel as if I were going to two schools, one real-world school and one online school. Every day I have endless exercises to do and feel very tired. Worse still, I feel I have lost interest in my study now. What shall I do?

（写作内容）

1. 用约30个词概括上述利用在线教育app学习的现象；

2. 你是支持还是反对利用在线教育app学习？请谈谈你的看法，并用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

（写作要求）

1. 作文中可以利用了解到的经历，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

（评分标准）

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】As the Internet combines deeply with education, online learning apps are springing up. Many students have adopted them as efficient learning tools, which may also have negative effects on other students.

In my opinion, online learning apps are an inseparable part of a student’s life and should be welcomed. After all they are of great help to our study. For example, when I meet with a problem I can’t work out after a few attempts, I will turn to my tutors there. A simple click of the button will bring me the answers, often with detailed analysis and different solutions. Besides, by participating in activities such as talent shows on such websites, I have enjoyed myself and gained confidence.

Of course, it is unwise to rely wholly on such online learning apps. However, they can serve as good helpers to us if we learn to employ their advantages and avoid the disadvantages.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生概括上述利用在线教育app学习的现象，谈谈支持还是反对利用在线教育app学习。

第一步: 审题

体裁: 应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构: 总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 用2-3个理由或论据支撑看法。

2.不得直接引用原文中的句子。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

be delighted to；grateful；be supposed to do；look forward to；spring up；

第三步：连词成句

As the Internet combines deeply with education, online learning apps are springing up.

Many students have adopted them as efficient learning tools, which may also have negative effects on other students.

In my opinion, online learning apps are an inseparable part of a student’s life and should be welcomed.

For example, when I meet with a problem I can’t work out after a few attempts, I will turn to my tutors there.

A simple click of the button will bring me the answers, often with detailed analysis and different solutions.

Besides, by participating in activities such as talent shows on such websites, I have enjoyed myself and gained confidence.

However, they can serve as good helpers to us if we learn to employ their advantages and avoid the disadvantages.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause (从句), In spite of+n./doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改