Question

假设你是李华，是高一年级学生会主席，开学以来发现同学早餐时间、课间都在学校超市买方便面等垃圾食品作为早饭，并吃完后随手扔得满校园都是垃圾袋，你为此很担心。请你给校长写信，希望早餐期间、课间关闭超市，同时提出自己的建议。内容提示：
写信理由：
1．垃圾食品含脂肪，糖太高，对身体有害；
2．垃圾食品会导致癌症，心脏病；
3．塑料垃圾袋使得校园脏乱差。
你的建议：
早餐时间、课间关闭超市  2. 提倡学生养成良好的饮食习惯
注意：1．可适当增加细节，使短文连贯、通顺；
2．短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
Dear President,
I’m Li Hua in Grade one. Recently, I have noticed most of students have bought junk food from supermarket instead of breakfast. I really worry about it.

Answer 1

Dear President,
I’m LiHua in Grade one. Recently, I have noticed most of students have bought junk food from supermarket instead of breakfast. I really worry about it.
As we all know , junk food, such as instant noodles and hamburgers, is high in fat and sugar. So eating too much junk food is bad for us students’ health. Even worse, it not only can make students overweight but also can lead to some diseases, such as heart disease and cancer. Last but not least, the packing bags thrown by students make our school dirty.
In my opinion, supermarket should be closed at breakfast time and between classes. Our school should appeal that students develop a good eating habit to make sure that they have a balanced diet.
I’m looking forward to receiving your reply.
Yours
LiHua

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