题目内容
国外某网站将举办新一轮网上讨论活动,正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是莆田八中的学生李华,经常访问该网站,现在请你用英文给网站发送一封电子邮件,向其推荐话题。
内容包括:1、自我简介;
2、写电子邮件的目的;
3、话题:我们应该学会感恩;
4、推荐的理由;
5、预祝活动成功。
注意:1、词数:120左右;
2、邮件中不能出现本人的真实信息。
Dear Sir,
I’m glad to write to you about my opinion.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
Dear Sir,
I’m glad to write to you about my opinion. I’m a student from NO.8 Middle School of Putian and often visit this website.
In my opinion, being thankful to others should be the hottest topic at present. As we all know, we live in a big family and every minute we can get support from the people around us. What can we do when we get support? The best thing we can do is to politely say “thanks” to them. This is our traditional culture. Our parents and teachers are teaching us how to be a person that can be grateful to others. We learn it from books or others around us. Being thankful is already deep in our hearts. So I strongly support this topic.
I would appreciate it if you take my topic into consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本次作文为提纲式作文,要求以电子邮件的形式呈现。写作要点具体明确,基本时态应定为一般现在时,且注意文章要详略得当,抓住文章的写作重点:要向该英文网站推荐话题,且说明推荐的理由。
亮点说明:该范文要点全面,详略得当,重点突出,时态及语言的运用准确。且句子结构的使用灵活多变,例如“being thankful to others”,“Being thankful”动名词作主语,非限制性定语从句“As we all know, ”,及定语从句“The best thing we can do is to politely say “thanks” to them. ”,“Our parents and teachers are teaching us how to be a person that can be grateful to others. ”为文章增色不少!