Question

【题目】学校网站新开设了一个”英语写作”栏目(column),以便学生发表(post)英语作文,进行交流,提高写作能力。现请你为该栏目写一个英文介绍,内容包括:

开设目的

栏目优势:教师在线(online)指导等

作文要求:内容贴近学生生活

优秀作文的鼓励办法

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注意:

1.词数120左右。

2.开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。

Welcome to the column “English Writing” !

Answer 1

【答案】Welcome to the column “English Writing” !

Recently the school website has set up a new column called “English Writing” which provides students with the chances to post their composition and communicate with each other. Not only can students improve their writing ability in this way, but they can strengthen their self-confidence.

The column has lots of advantages. It is the teacher’s guide online that has an advantage over the other columns. If necessary, the students can have a direct “ask and answer” with professional teachers. It is required that the composition should be related to the students’ life. What’s more, if it is organized well enough, the writer will be rewarded for it.

Hoping to the students’ participation.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。学校网站开设了一个“英语写作”栏目(column)，以便学生发表英语作文，进行交流，提高写作能力。现请你为该栏目写一个英文介绍，要用一般现在时来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可，尤其注意一定要写出自己的看法。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】

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