题目内容
短文写作
某英语报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”,现向全球征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为“I Want to Smile”的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份,根据以下思路图的提示用英语写一篇短文。
注意:1.根据思路图适当展开,以使行文连贯;
2.词数:120左右。
I Want to Smile____________________________________
解析:
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评分原则: 1、主要结构正确、用给定的英语词完整表达所给的汉语信息,给满分; 2、未用给定词不给分; 3、主要结构不正确不给分; 4、主要结构正确,信息完整,但一个或一个以上拼写错误扣0.5分; 5、主要结构正确,信息有遗漏扣0.5分; 6、主要结构正确,添加无关信息扣0.5分; 7、其它可以接受的可能答案。 书面表达: I Want to Smile There are many advantages of smiling.It can not only make us happy, but also please others.If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return.So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible. First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and taken all the trouble to bring me up.They arrange almost everything for me.With their help, I have made great progress.I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile.Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life. In a word, let's greet every day with a smile.Tomorrow is another day. |