Question

下面是李华同学作文中的句子，你能帮他改改吗？

After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight on till you come to a stream．Cross the stream and turn right, you will see a hill．Walk round to the other side of the hill．There you will see a lake．We will have our picnic there in the small woods by the lake．

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After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight on till you come to a stream．Cross the stream and turn right, you will see a hill．Walk round to the other side of the hill．There you will see a lake．We will have our picnic there in the small woods by the lake．将逗号用在两个或几个完整的独立句中间，称之为“串句”，这种错误在学生的书面表达中最为常见。犯这种错误的主要原因是受汉语的影响。