题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During the last summer holiday, I went on a journey to Beijing, that I visited the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. Much to their surprise, there were so much visitors in all the scenic spots that I had to push my way through the crowd. To be honesty, I had a hard time all the way and didn’t find the visit enjoyable or worthwhile at all.
As far as I am concerning, many people have the same experience, so I think that the number of tourist in some popular places of interest should be limited. In an addition, it’s better for us travel at different time periods. Only on this way can we enjoyed the beautiful scenery there.
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【解析】
本文是一篇议论文。作者去北京旅行,看到游客很多,作者认为受欢迎的景点应该限制旅游人数,人们最好在不同的时间旅行。只有这样,我们才能欣赏那里美丽的风景。
1.考查定语从句。此处Beijing是先行词,后面的定语从句不缺少主谓宾,缺少地点状语和引导词,应该用关系副词where引导,故把that改成where。
2.考查形容词性物主代词。根据前面的I,可知此处指“使我非常惊讶的是”much to one’s surprise,故把their改成my。
3.考查形容词。visitors是可数名词复数,要用many修饰,故把much改成many。
4.考查形容词。To be honest(诚实地说)是一个独立成分,be后用形容词,故把honesty改成honest。
5.考查固定短语。As far as I am concerned“依我看来”,故把concerning改成concerned。
6.考查名词复数。the number of…表示“…的数量”,此处指游客们的数量,后面跟可数名词的复数形式,故把tourist改成tourists。
7.考查固定词组。In addition“另外,此外”是固定短语,故把an去掉。
8.考查动词不定式。此处it做形式主语,后面的动词不定式的复合结构做真正的主语,故在travel前加to。
9.考查固定词组。in this way“用这种方法”,故把on改成in。
10.考查动词。文章最后一句是部分倒装,情态动词can后面跟动词原形,故把enjoyed改成enjoy。