Question

期中考试后，为了相互沟通，提高学生学习成绩。学校将召开家长会。请用英语写一篇短文谈谈同学们对家长会的看法。
要点如下：
1. 大部分同学赞同并陈述他们的理由。（至少写两点）
2. 少部分同学不赞同并陈述他们的理由。
3. 你的观点及理由。
要求：1. 可适当增加细节。      2. 词数：100左右。
After the mid-term examination, a parents’ meeting will be held in our school.
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       

Answer 1

Parents’ meetings are often held in schools in order to have a contact with the school and teachers and improve the students’ study, but different people have different ideas. A few days ago a parents’ meeting was held in our school and here are our views on parents’ meetings.
Most students think it is of great importance to have the meeting for parents to know more about their children at school. What is more, parents can get some good advice and useful information from teachers. On the contrary, a minority of students hold the view that it is useless because they think their parents may know their poor marks and improper behavior at school.
In my opinion, to understand children better, parents should keep in touch with teachers, so parents’ meetings are quite necessary.

试题分析：本篇写作题材是对家长会的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，有总述；正方观点及依据；反方观点及依据；和自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
【亮点说明】这篇范文观点明确，结构清晰，句式多变：Most students think it is of great importance to have the meeting for parents to know more about their children at school. 这句话用了it做形式主语， a minority of students hold the view that it is useless because they think their parents may know their poor marks and improper behavior at school. 这句话用了同位语从句， to understand children better, parents should keep in touch with teachers, so parents’ meetings are quite necessary.这句话用了目的状语。还有范文使用了What is more, On the contrary, In my opinion,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。