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假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中有10处错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
Dear Linda,
We have some excited news for you. Maria is going to have a baby! We don’t tell you right away. At first the doctor said she might have some trouble of the baby. Now he said she is just fine. She still works on her paintings every day. But she stopped from teaching her art classes.There is going to have another big change in our life.We’re moving back to New York! It’s very much nicer to be near the families for something important like a baby. Maria grew up in the Mexico, and she doesn’t have a family here. So that makes even more important to us.     


【小题1】excited改成 exciting
【小题2】Don,t改成 didn,t
【小题3】Of 改成with
【小题4】said改成 says
【小题5】去掉 from
【小题6】have改成 be
【小题7】去掉 very
【小题8】families改成family
【小题9】去掉 the
【小题10】makes 后加 you

解析试题分析：文章是写给Linda的信，告诉她Maria怀孕的消息，并且告知要回到纽约。
【小题1】我们有好消息告诉你。Excited修饰人， exciting修饰物，
【小题2】句意：我们没有马上告诉你。因为现在已经告诉Linda这个好消息了，所以是过去没有说：Don,t改成 didn,t
【小题3】词组：have trouble with sth…，“做,..有困难”，Of 改成with
【小题4】句意：现在他说她很好，用一般现在时：said改成 says
【小题5】句意：她停止上艺术课了。Stop doing停止做…，去掉 from
【小题6】句意：我们的生活将有另一个改变。这是There be句型：have改成 be
【小题7】much做程度副词，后面可以修饰形容词副词的比较级
【小题8】因为象婴儿这样重要的事情离家近一些真是好极了。这里不是指家人：families改成family
【小题9】Mexico是地名，前面不加冠词：去掉 the
【小题10】这使你对我们更重要。makes 后少宾语，加 you
考点：考查短文改错

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处,多者（从第l1处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改1 0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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