假设你是李华.前天是你的外国朋友Anne的生日.你本答应要参加她的生日聚会.但你当时正忙着准备期末考试.不小心忘了赴约.请写封信向Anne表达你的歉意.说明原因.并提出补救的方法.注意:1.词数120词左右, 2.文章中不得出现真实班级和姓名, 3.可适当增加内容.Dear Anne. Yours truly.Li Hua 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假设你是李华，前天是你的外国朋友Anne的生日。你本答应要参加她的生日聚会，但你当时正忙着准备期末考试，不小心忘了赴约。请写封信向Anne表达你的歉意，说明原因，并提出补救的方法。

注意：

1.词数120词左右；

2.文章中不得出现真实班级和姓名；

3.可适当增加内容。

Dear Anne，

____________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________

Yours truly，

Li Hua

Dear Anne，

I am indeed very sorry that I didn’t attend your birthday party the day before yesterday. I feel awful about it and want to apologize to you.

It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party. I should have come and celebrated the precious moment with you, but the end-of-term examination is around the corner， so I was too busy preparing for the exam that I forgot the appointment. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examination？ I do long for a pleasant chat with you.

It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of such a happy get-together. Once again， please accept my sincere apology.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇书信体裁的书面表达。首先要注意书信的格式，即：称呼、正文和结尾。分析本篇书面表达的要求，书信可以分为三方面内容，即表达歉意，解释理由，然后提出补救的措施。根据书信的特点，在信的开头要开门见山提出写信的目的，在本文是要表达自己爽约的歉意。因为写作本文的目的是道歉，所以语言一定要诚恳，礼貌。可使用的短语句型有：I am very sorry that …;forgive sb for doing ,I apologize to sb for doing sth , 在写作时还要注意语言的连贯流畅，要适当使用连接词，使上下文语义紧凑。此外，写作时还要注意时态和标点符号的正确使用。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达语言自然流畅，段落清楚，层次分明。在本文中作者使用indeed 、awful、sincere、should have come和I do long for a pleasant chat with you等词语和结构表达了自己深深的歉意和诚恳的请求，用词非常贴切，此外，高级词汇long for、around the corner 、precious的运用也显示了作者对词语的准确把握和驾驭能力。在文章中作者还使用了多种句型结构，如结果状语从句I was so busy preparing for the exam that I forgot the appointment.，强调句型It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of such a happy get-together等，所有这些都使文章亮点纷呈，可以说是一篇非常优秀的范文。

考点：考查提纲作文。

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