Question

第Ⅱ卷（共35分）

第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）

第一节：短文改错（共10分，每小题1分，满分10分）

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一个行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画—个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加—个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边的横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错误的不要改。

Last week, when I was taking train in Manchester, I saw a           76._______

scene it astonished me. On the platform I noticed a woman  in     77.__    _

worn clothes walking slowly. Suddenly, he fell to the ground.          78._______

There I see other people just keep walking as if                     79._______

something happened. For a moment the woman’s eyes were           80._______

full of hopelessness. Then she struggled to her foot and got on          81._______

a train. I just wondered why others didn’t try to help with this            82._______

woman. Later I talked about this event to my friend, who looked       83._______

at me and said, “What else did you do at that time? Just looking?”       84._______

I looked at him in silence. I realized I was just so selfish as others       85._______

on the scene, too.

Answer 1

76 taking后加a/my  77 it---that/which   78 he---she   79 see---saw 

80 something---nothing   81 foot---feet   82 with去掉  83 正确

84 else去掉   85 so---as