Question

Dear Jim，

    I’d like to tell you something about our school　　　　   1．_________

sports meet．It was holding on October 6，which was a　　   2．_________

fine day．There have over 1000 students and teachers　　　　 3．_________

take part in it．Wang Lin，a student from my class won the    4．_________

100-metre race．He finish the race in 12.6 seconds　　　　   5．_________

and broke out the school record．The sports meeting　　　　  6．_________

was really success．That was because we were　　　　　　    7．_________

all trying to do my best．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  8．_________

Although I was not one of the winner，I　　　　　　　　　　 9．_________

felt happy for that we had done．　　　　　　　　　　　　   10．_________

Looking forward to hearing from you．

 

Answer 1

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1．  本句没有错误。 2．  holding→held   这里运动会是被举行，用被动语态，所以是过去分词。 3．have→were   there be句型，所以把have 改为were。 4．take→taking   现在分词作定语。 5．finish→finished  运动会是发生在过去的事情，所以，改为过去时态。 6．去掉out  打破记录是短语break the record. 7．success前加a或 success→successful  success是可数名词，前面需要加冠词。 或者改为successful作表语。 8．my→our  前面说的是we were trying to do …所以把my 改为our。 9．winner→winners  “one of the winner”这里winner要用复数形式。 10. That→what  我为我们做的事情感到高兴。