Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

           2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I have a good friend, who’s name is Liu Mei. She is one of the excellent student in her class. Although she is clever, but she works hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents were out. She was doing her homework one Sunday morning while she smelt something burning. She stopped to look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for his help. She was proud of that she had done.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 who’s---whose

 student---students

 去掉but

 on---in

 while---when

 find---found

 immediate---immediately

 fire前加the

 his---her

 that--what

【解析】

试题分析：文章文章介绍了作者的一个朋友刘梅。刘梅是班里最优秀的学生之一，她学习很努力。一个周日的上午，刘梅发现邻居家里着火了，她拨打了119，消防员及时把火灭掉了。

 我有一个好朋友，她的名字是刘梅。定语从句中作定语用whose，故把who’s 改为whose。

 one of the+形容词/最高级+名词复数，意为“最......之一”，故把student改为students。

 although不能与but连用，故把but去掉。

 in common相同之处，故把on改为in。

 while与长动作连用，即与进行时连用，when既可与短动作连用，也可与长动作连用，故把while改为when。

 根据stopped可知，and后面也要用过去式，故把find改为found。

 修饰动词called用副词，immediate是形容词，故把immediate改为immediately。

 消防员赶到把火灭掉了。这里特指邻居家发生的火灾，故在fire前加the。

 根据Her neighbour可知，应该用her来指代Liu Mei，故把his改为her。

 of后跟宾语从句，从句中的done缺少宾语，故把that改为what。

考点：时态；定语从句；宾语从句；副词；冠词；固定搭配