Question

13．据报道，9月26日，昆明市某小学发生踩踏事故，造成多人死伤的惨剧．校园安全这一话题再次敲响了警钟．为了杜绝此类问题发生，请就"如何防踩踏"问题写一篇不少于120个词数的短文．要点如下：
简单描述事件内容；
事故后的个人感受；
预防踩踏措施（如：不蜂拥，靠右行，不推挤等）
参考词汇：校园踩踏：school stampede；推挤：push and squeeze
When it comes to the campus security，we have to take it seriously．It was reported that______．

Answer 1

分析 本文为话题作文．
话题背景为：9月26日，昆明市某小学发生踩踏事故，造成多人死伤的惨剧．校园安全这一话题再次敲响了警钟．
写作主题为：如何防踩踏
写作要点为：写作要点为：1，描述图画内容；2，分析原因；3，提供建议．

解答 One possible version：
When it comes to the campus security，we have to take it seriously．It was reported that a school stampede in Kunming City had caused several deaths and injuries at a local primary school on September 26th，which again shocked the people all over the country．
I felt very sorry about it．The stampede accident left me deep in thought．As students，what should we do to avoid it in future？Here are some tips．
Firstly，don't rush out at the time after class or school．You'd better wait to leave until there are fewer people．Secondly，learn to walk on the right side when walking with a crowd of people．Stay alert and watch your steps．Besides，stand still and try to hold on to something when there is pushing and squeezing．Last but not the least，once a stampede happens，you should curl up your body and bend your legs to protect your organs．
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点评 考生需根据图画信息，揭示图画中的道理，根据所提供信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．