短文改错 Helen is a twenty-years-old girl．She never had a job 1． before．Now she wanted get a job．So she went to meet 2． Mr Black, the manager of the hotel．Mr Black told 3． her it was getting very bu 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

第Ⅱ卷（非选择题，共35分）
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正。
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When Joan is a high school student, she always wanted to be a             76.
teacher. When she was at age of twenty, she began to teach               77.
English in a small school. She laughed a lot of with the children in her 78.
class and the students liked her very much. One day, one of the             79.
girl asked her in her class,“Why does men’s hair first become gray          80.
before his moustache（胡须, Joan?”“Sorry, I don’t know, Helen.”The     81.
teacher laughed and answered.“I don’t know, too.”said Helen with         82.
a smile,“But it is happened to my father.”Then a boy said with a                 83.
smile,“I know. I think that men’s hair becomes grey early than            84.
their moustache though their hair is sixteen years older than their          85.
moustache.”

短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Helen was a twenty-years-old girl. She has never had a job before. Now she wanted to get a work. So she went to meet Mr Black, the manager of hotel. Mr Black told her it was getting very busy in the hotel at the evening. He ask her if she was interesting in a part-time job. The girl said that she did. Then Mr Black said she had to work very fast and that she must be there at six every afternoon and work from six to ten, from Monday to Friday. He offered her with 4.5 dollars an hour. Hellen pleased with the offer and decided to start work the next day.

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Helen was a twenty-years-old girl. She has never had a job before. Now she wanted to get a work. So she went to meet Mr. Black, the manager of hotel. Mr. Black told her it was getting very busy in the hotel at the evening. He ask her if she was interesting in a part-time job. The girl said that she did. Then Mr. Black said she had to work very fast and that she must be there at six every afternoon and work from six to ten, from Monday to Friday. He offered her with 4.5 dollars an hour. Hellen pleased with the offer and decided to start work the next day.

短文改错

     Helen is one of my best friend. She taught us              1. __________
English when I attended training class two                       2. __________
years ago. Helen always make good preparation             3. __________
for the lessons, and she tried his best to make                  4. __________
her class lively. I was used to be poor in English              5. __________
especially on written English. Now I am                          6. __________
able write English letters or reports correctly.                  7. __________
I still remember how she helped me my                           8. __________
English patient. Teachers' Day is coming. I am                 9. __________
going to send her a card and give his best wishes.          10. __________

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