Question

假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“良好饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论, 请根据下列提示, 用英语写一篇发言稿。内容要点应包括：

部分同学的饮食习惯	良好的饮食习惯	个人看法
不吃早餐 爱吃零食 偏食 饮食过量 对我们的健康有害	饮食多样化 饮食定时定量有规律 多吃水果、蔬菜 对我们的健康有益 让我们避免各种疾病	重要性：有益身体健康……

注意：1. 发言稿必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；

2. 发言稿结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；词数：120左右。

3. 参考词汇：偏食 be particular about food 零食 snack(s)

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. ___________________________________________________________________

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That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.

To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we’d better have meals at a regular time and proper amount. If we get into good habits of eating meals, it will benefit us a lot. In addition, good eating habits can protect us from all kinds of illnesses.

In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. After all, health is the most important in our life. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据提示用英语写一篇关于良好饮食习惯的发言稿。写作要点包括：部分同学的饮食习惯；良好的饮食习惯；个人的看法等三个方面；词数在120词左右，注意开头和结尾不计入总词数；注意使用参考词汇；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：

范文涵盖了所有的要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了定语从句、条件句、倒装等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：定语从句which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food；条件句If we get into good habits of eating meals；倒装句Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.等，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用However, still, Besides, In addition, In my opinion等来衔接句子和段落，使语意变得连贯，衔接变得紧凑；范文注意使用some...some...some others...and still some表示列举，使表达更有层次感，条理更加清晰；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了too much, do harm to, keep fit, protect...from, try to do, build up, after all等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

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