Question

【题目】（河南省焦作市2016届高三第一次模拟）短文改错。

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It was extreme cold last Monday morning. While I was walking in my way to school, I noticed two street cleaner sweeping the street. Seeing them are working so hard on such a cold morning, I was moved and made up my mind do something for them. After arriving at school, I discussed with some classmates that we could do. The next day, we got up early and preparing porridge at home. When we handed the cleaners the hot porridge and expressed us appreciation for their hard work, they looked a little surprising at first. And then they took the porridge and thanked us happily. Since it was very cold, we all felt warm at that moment.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】extreme--- extremely

【2】in---on

【3】cleaner ---cleaners

【4】去掉them后面的are

【5】在mind和do 之间加 to

【6】that---what

【7】preparing---prepared

【8】us---our

【9】surprising--- surprised

【10】Since--- Though/Although/While

【解析】

【1】extreme--- extremely 上周一早上极其冷。cold为形容词,故应用副词修饰形容词，故extreme改为extremely。

【2】in---on on one’s way to在某人去…的路上。故 in改为on。

【3】cleaner ---cleaners 名词前有量词two,故 cleaner改为cleaners。

【4】去掉them后面的are 看到他们正在努力的工作。此处考查感官动词的复合结构：感官动词+名词+doing。故去掉are。

【5】在mind和do 之间加 to make up one’s mind to do sth．下定决心做某事。故mind后加to。

【6】that---what 我和同学们讨论该做什么，此处应为what引导宾语从句，且what在从句中作宾语。故that改为what。

【7】preparing---prepared 此处为and连接的两个并列的一般过去时。故preparing改为prepared。

【8】us---our 我们递给清洁工热水饺，向他们表达我们的感激。故us改成our。

【9】surprising--- surprised 刚开始的时候他们看起来有点惊讶。故surprising改为surprised。

【10】Since--- Though/Although/While 尽管很冷，但那一刻我们都感觉很温暖。故since改为although、though。