Question

【题目】书面表达

Mary在学校参加了一个Buddy Club, 从那以后，她改变了很多。请你结合下面所给的提示，写一篇英语短文。

	In the past	Now
Personalities	shy, quiet, get nervous easily	brave, outgoing…
Hobbies	reading	reading, singing…
Abilities		good at dancing, singing…

要求:

1. 覆盖要点，可以合理增加细节；

2. 80词左右，开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.

Mary used to be a shy and quiet girl. She used to get nervous easily and her face often turned red when she spoke with strangers. She liked nothing but reading alone in her free time.wever, she has changed a lot since she joined the Buddy Club. Now, Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isn’t afraid of speaking out in public anymore. What’s more, she has lots of hobbies, such as singing, writing and dancing. She is good at them as well.

People sure change all the time, right? What we should do is to learn from Mary. Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves.

【解析】

试题分析：根据要求Mary在学校参加了一个Buddy Club, 从那以后，她改变了很多；最后注意文章的时态。分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。

写作亮点：范文中有好的句型和短语给文章增色不少。如： She liked nothing but reading alone in her free time；Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isn’t afraid of speaking out in public anymore.等等。