Question

【题目】

(B)我们都在成长中，请你以How I’ve Changed! 为题，从外貌、性格、爱好等方面来描述你在这些年中的变化，并且具体谈谈你最大的变化是什么，以及带给你的收获。

1.条理清晰、语句通顺。

2.字数不得少于80词。

3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。

Answer 1

【答案】例文

How I’ve changed

My life has changed a lot in the last three years. I used to be short and have long hair, but now I am tall and have short hair. I used to be shy and my face turned red while I was talking to girls, but now I’m not afraid of speaking in public and I am popular in school.

The biggest change in my life is my hobby. I used to play computer games all the time, but now I realize it is a waste of time. I fall in love with books. Books are my friends. They give me knowledge and strength.

I didn’t use to eat vegetables or fruit. Now I’m used to having them. I know they are good for my health.

All in all, I am happy with these changes, because they have brought me the happiness of growth.

【解析】

1.题干解读：这是一篇命题作文，是以我的改变为话题的书面表达，把自己的过去和现在作比较，在个人的外貌，性格特征和爱好等方面加以比较。介绍过去的个人情况用一般过去时，可用used to+动词原形这个句型，介绍变化后现在的情况用一般现在时，写作时应注重语言结构的通顺和流畅，避免使用错误的单词、句子和时态。