Question

书面表达

根据汉语提示完成一篇短文。词数在60—80之间。

上周，比尔和妈妈一起去购物。他们买了围巾，棉风衣和皮鞋。后来又一起吃了日本寿司。比尔和妈妈度过了愉快的一天。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Bill’s mother likes going shopping a lot. Last Sunday she went shopping with Bill. First, they saw a beautiful scarf, so they bought it. Then they went to the Men’s Clothing Section. Bill’s mother chose a cotton windbreaker for Bill. The windbreaker made Bill look more handsome. Then they went to the Shoes and Hats Section. There they bought a pair of leather shoes for Bill’s father. After that, they went to eat Japanese sushi. They felt very tired, but they were very happy.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，根据汉语提示写一篇短文，从所提供的语境看出叙述发生在过去的事情，因此在写作中要用一般过去时，从整篇文章看出开头用一般现在时说明他妈妈的喜好，中间叙述过程，结尾表达自己的感受，语句通顺，符合逻辑。