Question

【题目】书面表达

假如钢琴家(pianist)李云迪是你的偶像，请根据提示，以My Hero为题写一篇短文，90词左右，短文内容必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头不计入总词数。

出生年份及地点	1982年，中国中部	才能	有音乐天赋；热爱天籁之音
学习历程	4岁开始学习拉手风琴(accordion)； 7岁开始对钢琴感兴趣，每天苦练； 2001年去德国继续学习；
成就	在全世界举办过许多音乐会；许多国际艺术节邀请他弹奏钢琴； 赢得了全世界的高度赞扬
你的愿望	……(至少两点)

My Hero

I am a music fan and the sounds of music are my favorite. Of all the pianists, Li Yundi is my hero. _________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

My hero

I am a music fan and piano music is my favourite. Of all the Chinese pianists, Li Yundi is my hero. He was born in central China in 1982. As a young boy, he could sing some difficult songs. He began to learn to play the accordion at the age of four. When he was seven years old, he showed an interest in playing the piano. Since then, he has practised it hard every day. Sometimes he enjoyed himself in the music world so much that he forgot to have meals. He finished first in several international competitions. He has held lots of concerts around the world.

My dream is to talk with him about his music. I hope it can come true some day.

【解析】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要注意动词单三形式和过去式的运用。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：文中用到了一些好的句型如：When he was seven years old, he showed an interest in playing the piano；My dream is to talk with him about his music.给文章增色不少。