Question

【题目】八年级第一批新团员（league member）和团干部即将在入团积极分子中产生。你认为你们班的某位同学品学兼优、全面发展，可以成为一名光荣的共青团员，请为他/她写一封推荐信。

Answer 1

【答案】November 8th, 2017

Dear teachers and schoolmates,

I think Jim from our class can be an honorable league member.He works hard than any other classmate in our class.He often help others with homework.He is good at playing sports.He always play football with friends after class.He likes singing with his friends.He is happy.

For these, I sincerely recommend（推荐）this classmate of mine as a league member.

Respectfully,

John

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如from our class，help others with homework，be good at，likes singing等。而I think Jim from our class can be an honorable league member. / He works hard than any other classmate in our class. / He is good at playing sports./ For these, I sincerely recommend this classmate of mine as a league member.等多种句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。