Question

【题目】 暑假来临, 请以珍爱生命注意安全等方面向全校学生发出倡议，内容提示：

1、不私自下河洗澡游泳。

2、不打架。

3、外出注意交通安全。

4、注意饮食。

5、你还应注意哪些？开头已给。

Dear students,

As we known, safety is the important thing in our life, so we should try our best to make sure we are safe. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Dear students,

As we known, safety is the important thing in our life, so we should try our best to make sure we are safe.

We mustn’t have a bath in river or ponds by ourselves without our parents’ permission. We should be friendly to others, because fighting is strongly banned. We should always pay attention to the traffic when we go out. Pay more attention to your diet. We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problem. Furthermore, in case of emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers.

In a word, following these safety rules above can make us live in peace.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。按照所给的安全方面需要的注意事项来展开描述。

2.例文解读：本文采用的是第一人称，时态采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强，句子通顺。

3.高分亮点：

短语：try one’s best to do sth“尽某人最大努力做某事”；pay attention to“注意”；in case of“万一”；in a word“总而言之”。

句子：We should be friendly to others, because fighting is strongly banned句中because引导条件状语从句；We should always pay attention to the traffic when we go out句中when引导时间状语从句。