题目内容
13.以Outdoor fun为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你所经历的记忆深刻的户外活动.注意事项:
1.内容包括:(1)W hen and where did you go?
(2)What activities did you do?
(3)What did you like about the activity (activities)?
(4)Who did you play with?
(5)How did you feel?
2.适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺.
3.短文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息.
4.词数70左右.
Outdoor fun
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分析 【高分句型一】
When we were nearly the top,it rained heavily,we were all wet and cold当我们几乎快到山顶了,雨下大了,我们都淋湿了很冷.
when引导的时间状语从句.
【高分句型二】
How happy we felt!我们感到多么开心啊!
how+adj/adv+主语+谓语!感叹句的运用.
解答 Outdoor fun
Last Sunday our class decided to climb the mountain.(时间地点,和谁一起)
At first we arrived at the foot of the mountain by bus then it started raining a little but we didn't stop.
When we were nearly the top,it rained heavily we were all wet and cold.【高分句型一】Someone said we should stop but our teacher said we should keep going on.
At last we got to the top of the mountain the rain stopped and everyone shouted happily in excitement.(经过)I like spending time with my friends.(喜欢和朋友在一起)How happy we felt!【高分句型二】(感受)
点评 需要自己先确定写作内容,然后在动笔写作.选取材料时,注意选择自己熟悉的内容.在写作时要注意时态,人称和固定词组的搭配,要注意语言的规范性.结合材料可知本文主要是一般过去时态,人称是单数第一人称,注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题.写作中适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系.
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