题目内容
【题目】书面表达
国务院印发了《国家中长期教育改革和发展规划纲要(2010-2020年)》,首次将“建立中小学生课业负担监测制度”写入教育规划纲要中。请以“My Homework”为题,写一篇不少于80词的短文。
内容包括:
1.简单叙述你每天做作业的基本情况;
2.做作业的好处是复习知识和提高成绩等;
3.大量的作业对你的学习是否有帮助?为什么?
4.希望老师不要布置太多的作业,让学生有更多放松的时间。
作文要求:
1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名;
2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。
My homework
【答案】
One possible version:
Our teachers always give us some homework to do every day. I often do my homework after school. My parents also ask me to finish my homework on time. It takes me about two or three hours to finish my homework.
Homework is good for us. It can help us to review what we have learned in class and help us to improve our study. But I think plenty of homework is not helpful. It will make us tired and exhausted. Sometimes I even don’t know what I do. Because of too much homework, I can’t spend my time on my hobby. I have many interests. But homework takes up most of my spare time. I hope our teachers don’t give us plenty of homework. We hope to have more spare time.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲式的作文。通过审题可知主要描述的是四个方面的内容,描述自己的作业情况及做作业的好处。论述大量作业是否有好处,最后提出自己对老师留作业的建议。根据内容可知主要用一般现在时。写作时注意语言的逻辑性。
写作亮点:这篇短文内容全面,论述非常有条理。在写作中运用了一些连词使文章更流畅,更哟逻辑。如:But I think…;Because of too much homework,等。而且文章中出现了多个复合句It can help us to review what we have learned in class and help us to improve our study.;I hope our teachers don’t give us plenty of homework.等,为文章加分。
【题目】书面表达
拥有健康的身体对于我们而言非常重要。根据表格内容,以“How to keep healthy”为题,给你的朋友和家人提一些保持身体健康的建议。
要点:1. 语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范;
2.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
3.根据表格内容,可以适当自由发挥;
4.词数不少于60词。
Sports | run, swim, play basketball... |
Food | milk, eggs, apples, junk food... |
Habits | get up early, enough sleep... |
Other advice | Happy, friendly... |
How to keep Healthy