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10.请根据所给的内容要点,以"My Cousin Amy"为题用英语写一篇短文.
1.我的表妹Amy,出生在北京,现在就读于阳光中学.
2.她最喜欢的功课是英语和美术.她也喜欢阅读,她是阅读俱乐部的一位成员.
3.Amy在学校吃午饭,经常吃米饭,蔬菜和肉,有时吃水果.
4.她还热爱运动,…,我认为她有一个健康的饮食习惯和生活方式.
My Cousin Amy                                      

分析 【高分句型一】
Because they are good for health.因为他们对健康有利.
be good for 对…有利
【高分句型二】
I think Amy has a healthy diet and lifestyle我认为艾米有一个健康的饮食习惯和生活方式.
think后是省略that的宾语从句.

解答 Amy is my cousin.She was born in Beijing.Now she studies at Sunshine Secondary School.(我的表妹Amy,出生在北京,现在就读于阳光中学.)Her favourite subjects are English and Art.She also likes reading very much.She is a member of the Reading Club.(她最喜欢的功课是英语和美术.她也喜欢阅读,她是阅读俱乐部的一位成员.)
Amy has lunch at school.She often has some rice,vegetables and meat.Sometimes she eats some fruit(Amy在学校吃午饭,经常吃米饭,蔬菜和肉,有时吃水果.).Because they are good for health.【高分句型一】She likes exercising/sports,too.She goes running every morning and swims twice a week.I think Amy has a healthy diet and lifestyle.(她还热爱运动,…,我认为她有一个健康的饮食习惯和生活方式.)【高分句型二】

点评 我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化,尤其是数字的不同表达法.

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