Question

【题目】书面表达 （15分）

以Wang Li’s Birthday 为题写一篇短文，字数70左右。

要求：1.王立的生日在中秋节，他收到了朋友及父母的礼物；

2.王立做了两个灯笼（lantern）, 爸爸帮助挂了起来（hang up）,妈妈为他准备了月饼和生日蛋糕；

3.晚上他和家人一起在户外赏月；

4.那天他过的很高兴。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Wang Li’s Birthday

Wang Li’s birthday is on the Mid-autumn festival. On this day, he received a lot of gifts from his parents and friends.Wang Li made two lanterns, and his father helped him to hang them up. His mother prepared moon cakes and birthday cakes for him. In the evening, he went outdoors to enjoy the moon and ate the birthday cakes with his family. That day he had a good time.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给提纲作文，介绍王立的生日。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Wang Li’s birthday is...,Wang Li made ...，His mother prepared ...，he went outdoors to ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，完整地表达出提纲中的内容。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了王立的生日在中秋节，接下来介绍王立收到的礼物和所做的事情，最后表达王立在这一天玩得很高兴。此处a lot of, hang sth up, prepare sth for sb, go outdoors, have a good time等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。