Question

假如你们班来了一位新同学Ｔｏｍ，请根据下面中文提示写一篇60-80词的英语短文介绍他。

1.他16岁，来自美国，学习努力，对人友好，我们都很喜欢他。

2.他习惯很好，从不熬夜，总是很早起床。

3.他每天锻炼，非常健康。

4.上周末天气晴朗，他和家人去了故宫，在那拍了许多照片，还吃了北京烤鸭，他觉得很美味，玩得很开心。

参考词汇：锻炼exercise；美国the United States；熬夜stay up late；

故宫 the Palace Museum； 北京烤鸭Beijing Roast Duck

要求：内容正确，语句通顺，字迹工整，不少于80词。

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Answer 1

One possible version：

I have a new classmate, Tom. He is sixteen years old. He is from the United States. He works hard and he is friendly to us. So we all like him. He has good habits. He never stays up late and he always gets up early. Because he exercises every day, he is very healthy. Last weekends it was sunny, so he went to the Palace Museum with his family. There he took a lot of photos and ate Beijing Roast Duck. He thought it was delicious. He had fun there.

【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍班里的新同学Tom。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态和一般过去时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I have ......;He is......;He has......;so he went to......；He thought.......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文中要包含题目所给的词汇。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的新同学的名字，接下来介绍他的生活习惯，最后介绍他上周参观故宫时所做的事。此处用了 is from，works hard， is friendly to，stays up late ，took a lot of photos等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。