Question

根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。

参考词汇：terminal station 终点站

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Tom is a kind-hearted boy. One day, he went to the museum by bus. When he got on the bus, he found a seat and sat on it. After a while the bus stopped at the next stop and an old man got on the bus. As soon as he saw him, Tom stood up and gave his seat to the man. But the man didn't accept it. Tom was worried and he came up an good idea. He told the man that he would get off the bus the next stop and the old sat on his seat. Tom stood by the man and he felt sleepy. Seeing this, the old man reminded that he was going to get off the bus. Tom felt embarrassed and he told him the truth that he would get at the terminal station. What a good boy Tom was and I think we should learn from him.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给图画作文，描述一个小男孩Tom在公交车上给一个老爷爷让座的故事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When he……；As soon as he…….；He told the man that……；the old man reminded that……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头描述了Tom上了公交车，接下来描述为他给一位老爷爷让座，假装说自己下一站就下车，最后指出要向Tom学习。此处用了got on，gave his seat to，felt sleepy，learn from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：图画作文。