题目内容
【题目】在你的成长历程中，一定收到过礼物。有件礼物不一定贵重，但是在你看来却非常珍贵。某英语杂志以“ A Precious Present(一件珍贵的礼物)”为题，举办征文活动，请写一篇短文，跟大家分享。
要点提示：
1．这件礼物是什么？
2．你为什么觉得它珍贵？
3．它背后有什么故事？
要求：
1．语言规范，语句通顺，内容充实；
2．字数：不少于100词；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A Precious Present
The title “A Precious Present” reminds me of quite a few gifts I've got.
I'll regard it as a treesure forever.
【答案】A Precious Present
The title “A Precious Present” reminds me of quite a few gifts I've got. Yet, the first comes to my mind is the book, The Adventures of Tom Sawyer.
On my tenth birthday, my father gave it to me as a gift. Because I didn't like reading, I put it on the bookshelf. One boring day, I picked it up and looked through it. Unexpectedly, the story interested me greatly. I found pleasure in reading books. From then on, I became fascinated in reading.
Though the book is not valuable, it's precious. I'll regard it as a treasure forever.
【解析】
这篇作文要求以珍贵的礼物为话题，写一篇文章。题目中给出一些提示，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。
【题目】
when home happy be so his spend with park on |
Last Monday, my husband and I 【1】 some time in the park next to our house. We often went to this 【2】 and we knew there were some homeless people. They sometimes stayed 【3】 the benches (长椅). We brought along some apples, oranges and a few bottles of water to share with them. I felt great happiness 【4】 I watched them eating our things. They said it was a big dinner for them and it was the luckiest day for them in their lives.
Among them, there 【5】 a homeless boy Bruce. He was about eight years old and he lost 【6】 parents in a car accident, 【7】 he couldn’t go to school. When I asked him, “Do you like to school?” He said yes. We decided to take him 【8】 and let him go to school. The boy was happy to live 【9】 us.
From that day on, little Bruce became our son and went to school 【10】 .