Question

【题目】现在手机是人们生活的必需品，在给我们提供便利的同时，也有很多负面作用。

很多人成了“手机控”。请你根据要求谈谈对自己的看法：

1. 手机的正面作用；2. 手机给人们带来的烦恼；3. 如何防止成为“手机控”。

Answer 1

【答案】 Phones can help us communicate more easily and know about what's happening around the world. Today many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. Depending on mobile phones too much is bad for health. Looking at mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes. Playing with mobile phones is a waste of time and harmful to study. I think young people should spend more time doing sports or being with their family and friends. They should also pay more attention to their studies. If they fill their time this way, they won't have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment.

【解析】

这是一篇开放性话题作文，针对很多人成了“手机控”这一现象，结合自己的亲身经历，谈一谈自己的观点。考生首先要阅读前面的提示去认真审题，确定出文章的中心，用一般现在时态来表达。要求从三个方面去完成写作：1. 手机的正面作用；2. 手机给人们带来的烦恼；3. 如何防止成为“手机控”。需要自由发挥的地方较多，比如手机的正面作用可以写有利于我们的沟通与交流，通过上网了解世界上所发生的事情，手机的负面作用可以写手机对健康的危害，对学生学习的影响等等。最后总结并发出呼吁。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。