Question

【题目】书面表达

请你给班主任王老师写一份推荐信，推荐王芳做班长。要点如下：

1.有很多好的个人品质，聪明，富有创造力；2.勤奋好学，为人谦虚，从不炫耀；

3.乐于助人，常帮助我们学习功课；4.做事很有条理，能使所有事情保持井然有序.

Dear Miss Wang,

I would like to recommend Wang Fang to be our monitor. Because she _____________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Lei

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Miss Wang

I would like to recommend Wang Fang to be our monitor.Because Wang Fang is an excellent student. She got good grades in all the courses. She is smart and thoughtful.She is hard-working and modest.And she never shows off. She is also friendly and considerate, and she is always helping others with their lessons. She does everything carefully and keeps everything in order.

Yours

Li Lei

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者推荐王芳做班长的推荐信。小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如She is smart and thoughtful.She is hard-working and modest.And she never shows off. She is also friendly and considerate, and she is always helping others with their lessons.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。