Question

【题目】书面表达。

中考即将来临,许多学生都感到学习紧张，压力很大，他们很苦恼。为此，你们学校以课后放松方式进行了调查，请你以How to relax yourself? 为题写一篇80词左右的短文，向校刊投稿。

要点提示：1.学生压力大及其表现；2.学会放松很重要；3.常见的放松方式；4.最适合你的放松方式；5.你的建议。

参考词汇：压力 pressure 压力大的：stressed out

How to relax yourself?

Answer 1

【答案】How to relax yourself ?

Now many students often feel much pressure. They always feel tired because they have a lot of homework to do every day.

It’s important for the students to relax. It keeps your mind clear and make you not be nervous. There are many kinds of relaxing ways. For example, you can try to have enough sleep, and you can listen to your favorite music. You can also read some books or do some sports. For me, I often hang out with my friends.

While you are studying, don’t forget to relax yourself. You will study better after a good rest.

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如a lot of，every day，keep your mind clear，many kinds of，for example，try to do，enough sleep，listen to，do some sports，hang out，turn off，don’t forget to等。而固定句型It’s important for the students to relax. 和并列句you can try to have enough sleep, and you can listen to your favorite music. You can also read some books or do some sports.，以及While you are studying, don't forget to relax yourself.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。