Question

【题目】 写作

寒假刚刚结束，这个假期你做了什么有意义的事情？你收获了什么？请根据亲身经历，叙述假期里一件值得记忆的事情。100字左右。

Answer 1

【答案】An unforgettable thing

There was an unforgettable event in the past winter vacation. It happened on my way to my grandparents’ home on the second day after the Spring Festival. On this day, married girls go back to their parents' homes with their children.

My family took the bus to see my grandparents. On the bus, it was crowded. Luckily, I found a seat near the window. After a while, the bus stopped at the next stop. A woman got on with a baby in her arms. The woman stood next to me. I wanted to stand up and gave my seat to her, I was afraid of hearing the words“Look! That girl wants to be praised.”I looked around. Most of people were looking out of the window and some people were sleeping. Suddenly, a little boy behind me, about my age, stood up and asked the woman to take his seat. The woman said, “Thank you very much.”The baby in her arms also smiled. The boy was happy, too.

Love and helping others will make the world better. Do it as soon as you think about it.

【解析】

这是一篇命题作文，根据亲身经历，叙述假期里一件值得记忆的事情。由于在要点中只给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定时态主要词汇等问题，根据内容提示可知本文主要是过去时态和一般现在时，人称是第一人称。审清主题，列出本文的写作提纲。写作中可适当使用连词，注意表达顺序，表达要有条理性，语句通顺，意思连贯，要符合逻辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。