Question

1．"传递爱心，服务他人"是文明社会所倡导的理念．狮子会（the Lions）就是一个以此为宗旨的国际性服务团体．杨敏是狮子会的一名成员，多年来她一直乐于助人．请根据提示用英语写一篇短文，向校刊的English World栏目投稿，简要介绍杨敏的事迹，然后谈谈你的观点和打算．

	Ready to help others
	Yang Min Help others for years Go to the old people's home twice a month （cut hair，wash clothes，do some cleaning ） Offer people umbrellas or raincoats on rainy days
	Your  opinion… Your  plan…

要求：
1．短文内容必须包含表格所提供的要点，可适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；
3．词数：80-100（短文开头已给出，仅供选择使用，不计入总词数）．
短文开头：From time to time，we are moved by the people and things around us．YangMin is one of the persons I admire most．
As a member of the Lions，she has been helping others for many years．She goes to the old people's home twice a month to cut hair，wash clthes and do some cleaning for them．Besides，on rainy days she offers people umbrellas or raincoats for free．
I'm deeply moved by her story．I'm going to start with small things around me．I plan to give books and colthes to children in poor villages．What's more，I'll ask my parents and more friends to join me．
Small action can make a big difference．Let's help those who need help．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是简要介绍杨敏的事迹，然后谈谈你的观点和打算．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1简要介绍杨敏的事迹：帮助他人很多年，一个月去养老院一次，雨天免费提供雨伞或雨衣
2你的观点和打算．

常用到的重点短语：
offer sb sth 给某人提供某物
start with 以…开始
what's more 再者
join sb 和某人一起
make a difference 有影响
【高分句型】
1．①What's more，I'll ②ask my parents and more friends to join me．
①what's more 再者
②ask sb to do sth 让某人做某事；join sb 和某人一起

2．Small action can make a big difference．
make a big difference有很大的影响
3．①Let's help those ②who need help!
①let's do sth 表示提出建议．
②who作为关系词的定语从句，who 作为从句的主语，修饰先行词those．

解答 From time to time，we are moved by the people and things around us．YangMin is one of the persons I admire most．
As a member of the Lions，she has been helping others for many years．She goes to the old people's home twice a month to cut hair，wash clthes and do some cleaning for them．Besides，on rainy days she offers people umbrellas or raincoats for free．（介绍杨敏的事迹）
I'm deeply moved by her story．I'm going to start with small things around me．I plan to give books and clothes to children in poor villages．What's more，I'll ask my parents and more friends to join me．【高分句型】
Small action can make a big difference【高分句型】．Let's help those who need help!【高分句型】（你的观点和打算）

点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性．完成提示词时也要符合事实．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．