题目内容
书面表达(15分)
假如你是某青少年杂志社的编辑Peter,收到很多读者来信,要求了解更多关于魔术师傅琰东的情况。请根据下列提示,撰写一篇文章。
提示:
姓名:傅琰东 出生时间:1975年
出生地点:上海 家庭情况:父亲也是魔术师
外貌特征:中等个头,偏瘦,短发 性格特征:勤奋、善良
已参加春晚次数:4 理想愿望:让魔术带给大家更多欢乐
参考词汇:魔术:magic 魔术师:magician
春节联欢晚会:Spring Festival Gala Evening
要求:1、80词左右;
2、用自己的话介绍魔术师,可以适当添加信息,注意语句连贯。
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Do you like Fu Yandong, the great magician? He was born in Shanghai in 1975. He became very famous and popular after the excellent performance in the Spring Festival Gala Evening in 2011.In fact, this was his fourth time to take part in the gala. He worked really hard before he was successful. His father is a great magician, too. They have a happy family. Fu is always kind and hard-working, he hopes that magic can bring more joy and happiness to people’s life.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态,主语是第三人称,注意时态语态时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少.如: be famous and popular非常出名非常受欢迎, bring more joy and happiness to people’s life.给人民的生活带来欢乐幸福;Fu is always kind and hard-working, he hopes that magic can bring more joy and happiness to people’s life. 傅总是和蔼可亲和勤奋工作他渴望魔术能给人民的生活带来欢乐和幸福等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
考点:提纲作文。