Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是九年级的学生Tom，最近一直感到很烦恼。请根据提示词用英语给《英语报》的编辑写一封信，诉说你的烦恼，征求建议。书信包括以下内容：

1. 学习：英语学习有困难， 不知怎么学好英语；

2. 在校：经常犯困，思念外地打工的父母；

3. 在家：与祖父母意见不合，经常顶嘴；

4. 未来：考取一中，父母一定会以我为荣；考不上一中，父母可能.....， 老师可能.....， 我可

能.....。

5. 有礼貌地征求建议。

注意：1. 词数80-100；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Editor，

I’m Tom， a student of Grade Nine. I’m writing to tell you my trouble.

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Yours，

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor，

I’m Tom， a student of Grade Nine. I’m writing to tell you my trouble.

First I do not know how to learn English. I have difficulty learning English. I can’t understand my teacher in class because he speaks too quickly. and I can’t remember all the words.

Second， I often feel sleepy in class so my teachers are often angry with me because of that. But they don’t know I miss my parents so much that I can’t go to sleep at night.

Third， I can’t get along well with my grandparents. I sometimes talk back them because we are often in disagreement.

Finally， I want to enter No.1 Middle School. I hope my parents are proud of me. but if I can’t go to that school， I will let my parents down. Maybe my teacher will think I am too lazy and I will think I will be sad. So I really want to study hard and get good grades. but I really don’t know what I should do .

I have so much trouble. What should I do? Could you help me? I am looking forward to your letter.

Yours，

Tom

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文所给材料比较详细：介绍自己在学习，学校及家庭中的问题，介绍自己未来可能遇到的问题，并且有礼貌的提出征求的建议。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，及将来时。主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了一般现在时，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。