Question

【题目】Writing (作文)

Write at least 60 words about the topic “Less Pressure makes Life Better”(以“少点压力使生活更美好”为题， 写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

提示：面对中考，初三学生的压力很大。请就此问题谈谈你的看法或做法。

内容可包括：

普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试

你过去的压力：父母的期望；学习

你成功缓解压力的方法及效果：.......

Phrases for reference (以下短语仅供参考) ：

get on well with…. under pressure

worry about feel less stressed

（注：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分）

Answer 1

【答案】

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.

Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。同时针对个人的真实情况与短文的要求进行恰当的事合，更能加强作品的可读性。

写作亮点：本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，没有或基本没有语言错误；书写工整；字数符合要求。完全达到了预期的写作目的。