Question

书面表达（本大题共5分）

请根据以下提示描述一下你的好朋友Shirley, 内容要点如下:

Shirley个高，方脸，乐于助人，有礼貌。

一所男女混合学校八年级的学生，擅长数学、物理。

喜欢旅游，参观过许多中国的名胜古迹。

上周六是父亲的生日，他自己为父亲制作了一张上面有一些色彩艳丽的花的卡片……（发挥1-2句）

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I have a good friend named Shirley. He is tall and he has a square face and smiling eyes. He is a polite boy. He is good at maths and physics. He is also helpful. He often helps us with our homework. He likes travelling as well. Last Sunday, he with his parents went to the World Park by coach. Last Saturday, it was his father’s birthday. He made a card for his father. When his father saw it, he felt happy, Shirley was very happy as well.

He is always willing to help others, so he would like to be a social worker when he grows up.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲类作文。