Question

12．目前，许多学校都存在学生抄袭作业的现象．请就这个话题用英语谈谈你的看法．
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My opinion on copying others'homework
It's known to us all that some students copy others'homework．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The major reason why some students choose to copy others'homework is that they are too lazy to do homework by themselves．
这句话中"why some students choose to copy others'homework"为定语从句，修饰"the major reason"；"that they are too lazy to do homework by themselves"为表语从句，句中"too…to…"意为"太…而不能"．这句话意为：一些学生选择抄作业的主要原因是他们懒得自己做作业．
高分句型二：
In my opinion，in order to prevent students from copying，teachers had better reduce the quantity but improve the quality of homework．
句中短语有：in one's opinion 依某人的观点；in order to do sth 为了做某事； prevent sb from doing sth 阻止某人做某事；had better do sth 最好做某事．这句话意为：依我看来，为了阻止学生抄作业，老师们最好减少作业量但是要提高作业的质量．

解答 My opinion on copying others'homewor
  It's known to us all that some students copy others'homework．Here are my opinions toward this thing．（点明主旨）
  The major reason why some students choose to copy others'homework is that they are too lazy to do homework by themselves．【高分句型一】They think copying others'homework is convenient and fast．This bad manner can cause damage to them for they haven't made it to understand the knowledge in reality．What's more，if they have formed the bad habit of copying others'homework，the damage will grow more serious．（抄作业的弊端）
  In my opinion，in order to prevent students from copying，teachers had better reduce the quantity but improve the quality of homework．【高分句型二】Besides，students should be aware of the importance of doing homework themselves．Then，every student will do homework independently and their ability will also be improved．（提出建议）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．