Question

【题目】书面表达

如你是Zhang Ping, 刚刚收到加拿大笔友Jeff的来信，他想了解你的一些情况。现在请你给他回信，内容包括：1. 介绍自己的爱好，擅长的科目、运动等；2. 介绍自己的上学方式以及班里大部分同学的上学方式；3. 谈谈你的学校规则及你对这些规则的看法；4. 你喜欢的动物和原因。 词数：80词左右。

Dear Jeff,

Thanks a lot for your last letter. Now I am writing to tell you about my life here._____________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Zhang Ping

Answer 1

【答案】ear Jeff,

Thank you for your last letter. Now I’m writing to tell you about my life here. I like Chinese, our Chinese teacher is very funny. I also like sports. I am good at running and playing basketball. My favorite animals are pandas, because they are very cute and kind of shy. I usually go to school on foot because my home is not very far from the school. Many students take the bus to school. Some students ride their bikes to school. I have many rules at school. I can’t talk in class. We can’t run in the hallways. And we can’t eat in the classroom. We must eat in the dining hall. Oh, they are terrible. Do you have many school rules like us? Please write to me!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Zhang Ping

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如Thank for; tell about; far from; good at; kind of; play basketball; on foot; take the bus; at school; like us; write to me 等。而复杂并列结构I like Chinese, our Chinese teacher is very funny.和原因状语从句I usually go to school on foot because my home is not very far from the school./ My favorite animals are pandas, because they are very cute and kind of shy.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。