Question

【题目】假如你的家乡一年四季的天气情况如下表所述。请根据该表格中所提示的信息， 介绍一下你的家乡的气候状况。并根据自己的实际情况描述去你家乡游览的最佳时间，并陈述理由。

季 节	气 候 特 点
春	多风，有时会有沙尘暴（sandstorm）
夏	很热，也下雨
秋	天气凉爽，但是时间很短
冬	天气很冷，有时会下雪

要求：1.必须包括以上信息；

2. 可适当发挥想象；

3. 要求条理清晰、层次分明；

4. 要求词数为60-80左右。

Answer 1

【答案】My hometown is a beautiful place.

In spring, everything become green, the grass come out, there are flowers everywhere. But it is windy，sometimes there is sandstorm。

In summer, the weather is very hot, sometimes it rains. You can hear birds chirping in the tree and frogs singing in the riverside. So it is the best time to visit our hometown.

In autumn, everything become yellow, the fruits are mature, and wheat is ripe, It's the harvest time. The weather is cool, but it doesn’t last long.

In winter, the weather is very cold , it snows here. Everything is covered with whiteness.

How beautiful my hometown is! But I like winter the best. I can make a snowman and play outdoor. It is so exciting.

【解析】

试题这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文段落清晰，表达准确。使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: You can hear birds chirping in the tree and frogs singing in the riverside. 你可以听到小鸟在树上叫，青蛙在河边唱歌。How beautiful my hometown is! 我的家乡是多么的美丽！be covered with, 覆盖着等等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.